实用的学英语作文汇总七篇
在平凡的学习、工作、生活中,许多人都有过写作文的经历,对作文都不陌生吧,作文是由文字组成,经过人的思想考虑,通过语言组织来表达一个主题意义的文体。那么你知道一篇好的作文该怎么写吗?下面是小编整理的学英语作文7篇,希望能够帮助到大家。
学英语作文 篇1
立意不鲜明
经常看见孩子边写边数“一、二、三……”凑字数现象普遍,或者经常问老师:“写不出来,我能瞎编吗?”有些孩子极度缺乏生活常识或生活经历、也没经典阅读文学的滋养,造成“下笔无言”,或者写的东西单纯为了搞怪、好玩,没有实质性内容。
建议家长增加孩子的生活阅历和原版阅读,从而先做到“有语意、有观点、有情绪”。
结构不完整
小学生作文容易结构缺失,常见写着写着,突然结束没有结尾;或者没有开头,让读者莫名其妙…… 小学生作文通常逻辑混乱,思维跳跃,东一句、西一句,内容不关联。
建议先训练“框架式写作”,利用一些连接词理清思路,如:First of all, For a start, In addition… 进而做出取舍,突出闪光点。对内容进行取舍非常很有必要性的,避免文章冗长、论据雷同、突出文章的重点。建议训练孩子加强整篇概念:Introduction, Body, Conclusion, 即中文所说的`“总~分~总”,确保文章的完整性。
中式思维
小学生作文表达中式思维过重:学生中文思维能力远远超出其英文表达能力,所以出现错句、断句等现象。不少孩子写作文竟然变成了“中文翻英文”的过程,脑子里面构思的是中文作文,千方百计把它翻译成英文而已。
建议要培养孩子长期原版阅读习惯,积累词汇和形成英文思维,从而缩短当中转换环节。
基本功不过关
小学生作文单词拼写、语法错误众多:三单错误,时态混乱等等,建议避开雷区,扎实学好基本语法和句式,并养成检查习惯,进而做到下笔无错。
句式单一
小学生作文句式太单一:通篇一种到两种句式,即使没有错误,也很难归类到一等作文行列。
如果孩子年龄小,就只会那两种,如简单静态句或进行时,也建议控制好比例,适时转换。
学英语作文 篇2
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancingNo, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】 这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话,我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。 小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时,可以从两个角度下手:一是具体地描绘;二是和上面小朋友一样,粗线条地勾画,二者各有所长,另处在行文中使用一些问句,使用一些转述的.话,可以使作文更有灵气,避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancingNo, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子,使读者眼前为之一亮。
学英语作文 篇3
My father’s name is Wang han. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old. My father is a worker. He works in a factory.
我父亲的名字是汪涵。他有一个英文名字,杰克。他38岁。我的父亲是一个工人。他在一家工厂工作。
He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms.
他有两个大眼睛和两个大耳朵。他的'头发是短短的。我的父亲是非常瘦。他只有50公斤。
He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn lots of English from the program at that channel.
他非常喜欢学习英语。他每天学英语。我爸爸喜欢看电视。他最喜欢的电视频道是CCTV-10,因为他可以从这个频道的节目中学到很多英语。
English is my father’s good friend. I am my father’s friend, too.
英语是我父亲的好朋友。我是我父亲的朋友。
学英语作文 篇4
上学期我英语只考了68分,妈妈知道只有68分,“成绩这么低,怎么办,还不如去找个英语补习班。”“有啊!”“在哪里?”“是我们班的英语老师。”于是我拿出了英语老师的电话号码,打给了英语老师。
我果然去了老师家里,那里的人可多了,有十几个人,挤都挤死了。星期一、星期三、星期五的上午我们都要上学,在学习英语中,老师要我们认真的'学习。
下课了,老师给我们一些零食吃。有火腿肠、咪咪、酒鬼牛肉……特别是肯德鸡,同学们知道都高兴地跳了起来。个个吃的津津有味,一阵阵香味扑鼻而来。后来,我又吃了两个果冻,包装袋里还有两个小水枪,好开心呀!我拿着两个小水枪灌满了水,往同学脸上喷,他们也往我脸上喷,就这样打成了一往。后来又上课了。
在老师家,我们都围着大圆桌,就是这样度过了一个暑假,明年暑假,我还要来这里。
学英语作文 篇5
Hi! Good friends. My name is susie. Im ten years old. This is my pet. Its a turtle. He is also ten years old. His name is sandwich. He eats ten small fishes every day .
Look at him! He has a beautiful shell and two small eyes. He also has a long tail.
Now my turtle wants to have a little sister. They can play, sleep and walk together. Now, mr sandwich, please reach out your hand and say bye-bye. My friends,please call me. My telephone number is one two three four five.
【参考翻译】
您好!好朋友。我叫苏西。我Y已经十岁了。这是我的宠物。它是一只乌龟。他也是十来岁。他的名字是三明治。他每天得吃条个小鱼。
看着他!他有一个漂亮的`外壳和两个小眼睛。他也有一条长长的尾巴。
现在我的乌龟想有一个小妹妹。他们可以玩,睡觉,一起走。现在,三明治先生,请伸出你的手,说:再见。我的朋友们,请给我打电话。我的电话是一二三四五。
学英语作文 篇6
There are too many disabled people in the world. They have no differences from country to country. Some of them were disabled when they were born, the others were injured or hurt in all kinds of accidents, which made them disabled. Almost all of us feel sorry for them. We commiserate with them because they are another kind of people. But some disabled people refuse others’ commiseration. They think they can do everything by themselves. They don’t consider themselves as people who have defects. They think they are the same as normal people.
In fact, a great number of people with disabilities should be taken care of by others. They get help from the government or some beneficent organizations in society. But that’s not enough. They must look after themselves on their own. When a baby with disabilities is born, it should be taught to learn some particular skills to live. Or else, it would fail in the future. So one with disabilities must have abundant confidence to fit the hard life without others’ help.
学英语作文 篇7
Definitely Yao Ming! He is so great a basketball player. I never miss a single game of him. I love him because he plays basketball so well and most important of all, he is a Chinese. I am proud of him.